paulechaud

3ème Bac S

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oui bonjour,
Voila ce que j'ai fait:

Hello, I'm going to introduce myself ….
My name is paul Le Gall. I'm in 3A.I'm Fiveteen years old.
I was born in lucé, on May seventeenth.
I'm french.I live in lucé. Lucé is a small town I've got one brother: His name's Jeremy and he has seventeen years old.
I have one pet: It's a female cat. She is too cute.
My father is nurse and my mother is nursing auxiliary.
These are good jobs. Now here is my physical presentation
I've got short blond hair. I have green eyes, I'm a little bit fat and I'm quite tall. I'am one metre seventy three tall.
I've got glasses.
I'm so responsible, very polite but I'm not realy patient
I like playing computer and on top of that I enjoy running during the weekend but I hate watch.
football on TV.My favorite subject is English.
I hate speak spanish

Now, im going to give a presentation of manchester:
Manchester is a city located in north-west England, in the county of Greater Manchester. Third city in England, Manchester has about 441 000 inhabitants in 2005, the Red Devils. It has the status of the city since 1853 and is at the center of a large agglomeration of two and a half million inhabitants whose major cities are: Bury, Bolton, Rochdale, Oldham, Ashton-under-Lyne, Stockport, Salford, Altrincham , Wigan. This is the third largest conurbation in the United Kingdom in terms of population and the second urban area expanded with 2 539 100. Manchester area is the fifteenth most populous city of the European Union. The term "Manchester" is used both to designate the town as the town center.
Manchester is bordered to the south by the Cheshire Plain and the north and east by the Pennine mountain range. The story starts with the Manchester vicus created by the nearby Roman fort Mamucium built in 79 on a rocky hill near the confluence of the Medlock and Irwell. Historically, much of the city is part of Lancashire, but areas south of the River Mersey in Cheshire belong



Résultat:

Presentation de moi: 18/20
éxposé: 15/20

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