Paragraphe sur la mort de JFK

Devoir Anglais - Exercice - 2nde

Sujet :

Bonjour,je dois faire un paragraphe en Anglais sur mes hypothèses concernant la mort de Jfk.
J'ai fais le paragraphe suivant mais j'ai certainement dû faire beaucoup de fautes et il y'a certaines phrases que je n'arrive pas à traduire.(celles entre parenthèses)
Puvez-vous m'aider ?
Merci

Où j'en suis :

The president John Federal Kennedy was assassinated in 22 November 1963 while visiting Dallas.This one was with his wife in the car at the Dealey Plaza and was greeting the crowd.
Three shots were shooting of a close house and a little after, the policeman, Jefferson Davis Tippit was assassinated by Lee Harvey Oswald.
It turned out what the rifle used to kill the president was the same what that used to kill the policeman.
Lee Harvey Oswald has certainly coupable in the murder of JFK but i think he has the only one.
Besides, three days later the death of JFK, Lee Harvey Oswald was assassinated by Jack Ruby.
This one was (en contact avec) “The organized crime” enemies of the etat, moreover he met the members of Chicago’s mafia.
I think, Jack Ruby( faisaient parti d’un complot avec Lee Harvey Oswald et que ce dernier fut tué pour ne pas dévoiler le nom de leurs commanditaires.)
I guess, it is probably organizations such as FBI, CIA, and Illuminati have organized this murder of JFK.

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Geromine
1ère Bac ES - 7 points - 31/03/2010 à 18:16

Coucou, voici quelques suggestions de correction:

The president John Federal Kennedy was killed on the 22nd November 1963 while visiting Dallas.He was with his wife in the car at the Dealey Plaza and was greeting the crowd.
Three shots were shot of a close house and a little after, the policeman, Jefferson Davis Tippit was killed by Lee Harvey Oswald.
It turned out that the rifle used to kill the president was the same which was used to kill the policeman.
Lee Harvey Oswald is certainly responsible of the murder of JFK but i think he wasn't the only one.
Besides, three days after the death of JFK, Lee Harvey Oswald was killed by Jack Ruby.
This one was in contact with “The organized crime” enemies of the governement, moreover he met the members of Chicago’s mafia.
I think, Jack Ruby( was part of a plot organized with Lee Harvey Oswald whom was killed in order to stop him from revealing the name of their financier.)
I guess, it is probably organizations such as FBI, CIA, and Illuminati who have organized the murder of JFK.

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