texte que j'ai écris sur John Lenon en anglais merci de me le corriger .

Devoir Anglais - Exercice - 5ème

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Bonjour,
D’après les informations données je dois écrire en anglais un texte sur John lenon.
Date of birth : october 9th 1940
Place of birth : Liverpool (England)
Job : singer –song writer
Wife Yoko Ono wedding in 1969
1950-1970 : play with Beatles and travel around the world
Famous song : Imagine
Symbolize peace and love
Death 8/12/80
Assassinated by a lunatic.

Où j'en suis :

Voici mon texte merci de me le corriger et éventuellement me dire comment améliorer le récit. Merci pour votre aide.
Jonh Lenon was born on october the 9th 1940 and he was from Liverpool(In England).
He was an excellent singer and song writer .His wife was Yoko Ono they get married in 1969.
In 1950-1970 he played with the beatles and travelled all around the world .
I am sure that you know his famous song it was “imagine”of course .He symbolized peace and love .
John Lenon was death on 8 december 1980 he was assassinated by a lunatic.

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2nde Bac S - 90 points - 03/04/2010 à 11:12

John Lennon was a member of the famous music band, the Beatles. He was born the october 9th 1940 in Liverpool (England). He was an amazing song writter and singer and he still has a lot of fans all over the world. He married Yoko One, a brillant artist, in 1969. His most famous song is "Imagine" wich is about love and peace. He was assassinated the december 8th 1980 after a concert by one of his fan. Today, he's still considered as one of the most brillant and popular singer of the seventies.

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