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traduction d'une phrase!!! corection d'un devoir
Devoir Anglais - Exercice - 2nde
Sujet :
j'aimerai dire cette phrase en anglais:
Tout a commencé 9 mois auparavant lorsque pendant un diner aurestaurant mes parents m'ont annoncé que la famille allait être agrandie par l'arrivé d'un petit frère ou d'une petite soeur.
j'ai essayé de la traduire mais je n'y arrive pas je pense que je me trompe sur les temps, je ne sais pas s'il faut mettre ago, s'il faut mettre at ou to (the restaurant).
Si quelqu'un savait comment se dit une charlotte ( médicale pas le gâteau)
je ne suis vraiement pas douée en anglais mon texte c'est du mot à mot.
Où j'en suis :
everything had begun 9 months (ago)when during a dinner at/to the restaurant my parents announced that the family would be enlarged by the arrival of a little brother or sister.
Mon texte intégrale donne ça mais je suis vraiement nul en anglais avec moi s'est presque d mot à mot enfaite:
I will never forget this night of April 19, 2003, when my sister came into the world.
Everything had begun 9 months previously when during a dinner at (to) the restaurant my parents announced me that the family would be (bigger) enlarged by the arrival of a little brother or sister. I was obviously very happy.
This famous day of April 19, 2005, the night my mother was violent contractions and we went in haste to the hospital. Nurses we settled in a room with walls painted a pale pink with a large window through which you could see the distant city lights. A midwife took my parents in the delivery room, leaving me alone.
I could not wait patiently in the hospital room and decided to wait in the hallway. Sitting on an uncomfortable chair I began to worry, it was a good half hour I had seen one, the lights went out the hallway, I could make more than the tip. But most distressing was the calm that reigned there, no sound, no cry or a tear ...
I was pacing when suddenly I heard through the door a cry that made me jump. This was not a cry of terror, or amazement, but that of an infant in good health. It lasted only briefly but enough to reassure me and I could not repress a sigh of relief.
Moments later the door opened on a nurse, she was wearing a blue medical tunic, a charlotte on the head and shoes on, like in the movies. She said she would learn to enable me to return to the workroom.
Two seconds later she appeared and took me to a room where I had to dress like her and led me to a very large room was dimly lighted, where five people received me as well as my father always had his camera in hand. He pointed at the other end of the room, a nurse who was holding in her arms a newborn.
My little sister was only a few minutes she was very small and quietly sucking her thumb. She was placed in a cradle, covered with a white blanket and brought it to me. It had drawn (raise) on his head a mass of black hair, his eyes were closed, his chubby cheeks were all pink, her tiny fingers were folded and his mouth formed a heart around his thumb. I gently stroked her cheek and pushed to a dormitory.
It was the most magical moments of my life, damage that it may grow so fast.
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La correction apportée par aude
ke ne cais pas réécrire tout mon texte mais j'ai b1 pri en compte toutes vos réponse et j'ai demander a une copine de m'aider
je croise les doigts j'espere avoir une bonne note
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nadiia59
3ème Bac S - 5 points - 14/03/2010 à 18:33
Tout a commencé 9 mois auparavant lorsque pendant un diner au restaurant , mes parents mon annoncé que la famille allait être agrandie par l' arrivé d'un petit frère ou d'une petite soeur.
Everything began 9 months before lorsque hanging a diner on the restaurant, my parents my announcing that the family was going to be extended by l ' arrived d 'un small brother or d 'une small sister.
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