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Write an entry for your own travel blog (imaginary or real). Choose a destination. Find a picture to illustrate your entry and write your blog. Make sure you name the place, describe the setting, the weather, and at least one anecdote or experience. Remember you want people to like your blog, so make it interesting! Describe your feelings, make people want to visit the same place (or stay away from it if it is horrendous!).Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voilà ce que j'ai déjà fait.Early in the morning, I left my home. I tought the train in Lille to Grenoble. Then, I arrived to Méribel, in the hearth of the Alpes of France, by bus. I saw a very beautiful country. The mountains... and the sun shined. The sky was without clouds, it was blauw. The tops of the moutains were recorved with snow. But in the pastures the nature was groen.
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je t' AI corrigé... ^^ désolé
Merci, cela va améliorer le début, j'essayerais de continuer demain, mais ce soir, il est trop tard.
Merci.
Merci.
Voilà, j'ai corrigé le début, et j'ai continué:
Early in the morning, I left home. I took the train from Lille to Grenoble. Then, I arrived to Méribel, in the heart of the Alpes in France, by bus. I saw a very beautiful country. The mountains... and the sun shined. The sky was unclouded, it was blue. The tops of the moutains were corved with snow. But in the pastures, the nature grew.
ce que j'ai rajouté:
I was very happy, it's splendid. A lot of flowers, cows and goats in the meadows, houses out of wooden. The village of Méribel is accessible. The poeple were very nice. I stayed in a hotel. It was the cheapest, and it was comfortable and moderne.
Early in the morning, I left home. I took the train from Lille to Grenoble. Then, I arrived to Méribel, in the heart of the Alpes in France, by bus. I saw a very beautiful country. The mountains... and the sun shined. The sky was unclouded, it was blue. The tops of the moutains were corved with snow. But in the pastures, the nature grew.
ce que j'ai rajouté:
I was very happy, it's splendid. A lot of flowers, cows and goats in the meadows, houses out of wooden. The village of Méribel is accessible. The poeple were very nice. I stayed in a hotel. It was the cheapest, and it was comfortable and moderne.
Early in the morning, I left home. I took the train from Lille to Grenoble. Then, I arrived to Méribel, in the heart of the Alpes in France, by bus. I saw a very beautiful country. The mountains... and the sun shined. The sky was unclouded, it was blue. The tops of the moutains were corved with snow. But in the pastures, the nature grew.
I was very happy, it's splendid. A lot of flowers, cows and goats in the meadows, houses out of wooden. The village of Méribel is accessible. The people were very nice. I stayed in a hotel. It was the cheapest, and it was comfortable and moderne. During the stay, I visited the cascade of Gebroulaz. I went there,
with cableway. I flew the National Park with its wonderful flowers. I also visited an old farmhouse, where I tasted the cheese regional. It was intersting to talk with these people, and learn a lot about theirs habits and culture. I walked up to the Lake La chambre, where I have a paddle and canoe. It's a good experience for me.
My holiday was fantastic. It's an area to visit, it's beautiful. It worthwhile.
Pourriez-vous finir de me corriger?
Merci d'avance.
I was very happy, it's splendid. A lot of flowers, cows and goats in the meadows, houses out of wooden. The village of Méribel is accessible. The people were very nice. I stayed in a hotel. It was the cheapest, and it was comfortable and moderne. During the stay, I visited the cascade of Gebroulaz. I went there,
with cableway. I flew the National Park with its wonderful flowers. I also visited an old farmhouse, where I tasted the cheese regional. It was intersting to talk with these people, and learn a lot about theirs habits and culture. I walked up to the Lake La chambre, where I have a paddle and canoe. It's a good experience for me.
My holiday was fantastic. It's an area to visit, it's beautiful. It worthwhile.
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Merci d'avance.
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Early in the morning, I left home. I took the train from lille to Grenoble. Then I arrived to Meribel, which is located in the heart of the Alpes in France,by bus. I saw a very beautiful country. The mountains... and the sun shined. The sky was unclouded, it was blue. The tops of the mountains were covered by snow.But in the pastures, the nature grew.